John Gondolf Poet Shape

Beware - Shape

BEWARE !!!


                                   thornsth
                         thornsthorns thornsth
                      thornsth                ornsthor 
                     thornsth       orn        sthornsth
                      thornsthor     n        sthornsth
                       thorns  thornsthornstho   rns
                        thor   thornsthornsthorn  st 
                        thorn  thornsthornstho   rn 
                         thorn   thornsthornst   ho
                             rns   thornsthorn   st
                                 thornsthornstho 
                                      thornstho 
                                         thor 
                                           ns
                                           th
	                                  or	         n
                                          th           orn
                                          th         orns   
                                         th       ornstho
                                         rn    thornstho
                                 	 rn   sthornsth
                                        or     nthorn
                                        th      orns
                                        th     o
                                        rn    s



October 24, 2018

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Emilia James October 23, 2021 at 2:09 PM Very clever John. These are not easy to do. I have done a couple of basic concrete ones but your one and designs like this are far more artistic. Hugs, Emilia : ) John Gondolf October 24, 2021 at 4:46 AM Thanks, Emilia, I must have had too much time on my hands that day. Hugs, John

Sandra Haight November 19, 2018 at 6:36 PM Wow, what a creation, John! You did this Shape so well! Yes, the rose...a thorned beautify for sure! Congratulations on your well-deserved Trophy win! Sandra :) John Gondolf November 19, 2018 at 7:12 PM Thank you so much, Sandra, I appreciate it. John

Connie Marcum Wong November 13, 2018 at 8:52 PM You certainly deserve your Trophy win with this artful entry John! Most imptressive! I loved it and congratulate you on your wonderful top honor! : ) John Gondolf November 13, 2018 at 9:11 PM Thank you so much, Connie, I appreciate it. John

Eve Roper November 11, 2018 at 10:17 PM Awesome , congratulations on your win... John Gondolf November 11, 2018 at 10:22 PM Thank you, Eve, I appreciate it. John

Jan Allison November 11, 2018 at 3:29 PM Very creative John, many congratulations on your top spot :-) Hugs Jan xx John Gondolf November 11, 2018 at 3:44 PM Thank you so much, Jan, I appreciate it. John

Brandy Nicole November 11, 2018 at 2:19 PM Congratulations John!! You have created a Masterpiece indeed, as this was chosen as the top winner. Well deserved my dear friend. :) Brandy Brandy Nicole November 11, 2018 at 5:57 PM You are very welcome. It's nice that this Pink Rose could inspire your shape poem. Thank you John, for being You. ~ Brandy John Gondolf November 11, 2018 at 2:33 PM Thank you so much my sweet friend, your thoughts mean much to me. This shape was inspired by a beautiful pink rose, actually a thornless rose I believe. All my best. John

Lycia Harding November 11, 2018 at 1:26 PM How cool! Congrats on your well deserved win! LyLy xoxo John Gondolf November 11, 2018 at 1:47 PM Thank you so much, LyLy, I appreciate your kind words. John

Line Gauthier November 11, 2018 at 1:17 PM Awesome, John. Congrats on your gold medal win. John Gondolf November 11, 2018 at 1:21 PM Thank you, Line, I appreciate it. John

Andrea Dietrich November 11, 2018 at 1:13 PM Oh I sure knew this one would be a winner BIG congrats to you. John Gondolf November 11, 2018 at 1:17 PM Thank you, Andrea, I appreciate your kindness. John

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 11, 2018 at 10:50 AM You beautifully captured the spirit of this contest John, your thorns snagging the top spot; congratulations and thank you! xomo John Gondolf November 11, 2018 at 11:03 AM Thank you, Maureen, I appreciate it, and thanks for hosting this fun contest. John

Winged Warrior November 11, 2018 at 10:38 AM Congrats!!!...excellent job, John...the game of thorns lol...love & light...^WW^ John Gondolf November 11, 2018 at 10:46 AM Thanks, WW, I appreciate it...peace... John

Wendy Watson November 11, 2018 at 10:18 AM Congratulations,John! This was both aesthetically pleasing and cleverly 'worded'. John Gondolf November 11, 2018 at 10:34 AM Thank you so much, Wendy, I appreciate it. John

John Michaels November 11, 2018 at 9:51 AM Nicely done - very impressive! Congrats on your First Place Win! Regards, John. John Gondolf November 11, 2018 at 10:06 AM Thanks, John, I appreciate it. I thought your broken heart was an excellent entry as well.

Wendy Watson November 9, 2018 at 1:15 PM So clever, John. I have good ideas but just can't master the technological skills! John Gondolf November 9, 2018 at 1:21 PM Thank you, Wendy, it takes a bit of patience. I believe I gave up more than a few cuss words along the way. All the best. John

Andrea Dietrich October 28, 2018 at 1:28 AM very clever one you came up with gosh, i am like caycay: clueless . anyway, I have an idea that is not all that great but it will go up in a few days!

CayCay Godwin October 28, 2018 at 12:24 AM I have attempted 3 different shapes, have 3 times gone cross-eyed and in each case I came close to cussing. These forms don't hold still, don't cooperate, so I know it was your effort that created such a beautiful rose of softness with its ironic hard and sharp thorn. Great job. Wish I could think of a form for, "quitting". Enjoyed. All the best ... CayCay

Harry Horsman October 27, 2018 at 4:28 PM Excellent, love this, John John Gondolf October 27, 2018 at 5:13 PM Thanks, Harry, I appreciate it.

Alexis Y. October 25, 2018 at 4:11 PM Hi John, I agree with Heidi, this is amazing:-) Alexis John Gondolf October 25, 2018 at 7:42 PM Thank you, Alexis.

Kim Rodrigues October 24, 2018 at 9:07 PM Beautiful! John Gondolf October 24, 2018 at 9:24 PM Thank you, Kim!

Brandy Nicole October 24, 2018 at 1:30 PM One must watch out for those thorns, beyond the beauty of the Rose. You have captured this perfectly John. It is amazing how the imagination can take words, and then shape them upon the page. And so beautifully too. :) Brandy John Gondolf October 24, 2018 at 1:36 PM Thank you for your thoughts, Brandy, and then the words and shapes on the page create an image in someone else's mind. Non verbal communication. I appreciate you dear friend! John

Ilene Bauer October 24, 2018 at 1:24 PM well done, john! i admire your patience... John Gondolf October 24, 2018 at 1:36 PM Thank you, Ilene, I appreciate it. John

Carolyn Devonshire October 24, 2018 at 11:39 AM Awesome! You have quite a creative talent for artwork, John. I can't do these shape poems at all. Wishing you high honors in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn John Gondolf October 24, 2018 at 11:52 AM Thank you, Carolyn. I had actually drawn this a while ago for someone on her birthday; when I decided to put it in the contest I changed the word from pink to thorns to add a little irony. John

Heidi Sands October 24, 2018 at 7:59 AM Wow , amazing. Good one John :) John Gondolf October 24, 2018 at 8:06 AM Thank you my friend :) John

Anne-Lise Andresen October 24, 2018 at 7:17 AM - Well done John, creative :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) John Gondolf October 24, 2018 at 7:21 AM Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, I appreciate it. John

Tom Cunningham October 24, 2018 at 7:08 AM Love this John, it must have took you a while to do it. Good luck. Tom John Gondolf October 24, 2018 at 7:16 AM Thanks, Tom, I appreciate it.