Beware of Love Trap

The pain is there somewhere
The love has passed long gone
Everything is still and silent
The crash of the heart is all that is heard
People say it will be all right
Nothing shall be same forever 
And am not going down without a fight
i wish we could stay together

Everything is lies; everything is dust in the eyes
I want to cry, yell or may be even die
My emotions are not mine to decide
Oh! Why me
Out of all the people why me

Love will not come ever again
He said he just could not explain
Was I just for fame , Where all those memories just a game
Or did I become too much of shame to be joined to your name
Was everything out of pity?

Everyone said I was pretty
Everyone said I was special 
Everyone said I was treasure 
So did you...

I ask my you darling where did I go wrong?
Was I too headstrong?
Was I too loud and impossible?
Was I irritating and unstoppable
We were to be a couple for lifelong
Then I ask you where I went wrong

Why did you leave me when I needed you most?
Why cheat on me was I devil or ghost
I will not fall into love trap again
It is a promise from which I shall not refrain...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 10/1/2013 7:59:00 AM
this is a powerful and deep write. Full of passion and heartache. The reader can feel your pain and sorrow. Nice job
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Date: 10/2/2013 10:20:00 AM
Thank you so much for your wonderful review..:)
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