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Beware

Hope's harbor serene 
Million dreams safely anchored
Beware of fear's subs!


© Demetrios Trifiatis
  07 NOVEMBER 2014

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Maurice Yvonne

November 13, 2014 at 8:53 AM

I love how you kept this Ku tight and intertwined. Line 1:harbor Line 2: anchored Line 3: subs. Really creative.

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 13, 2014 at 8:56 AM

It pays to be a...philosopher!Ha-ha! Merci for your visits dear, Maurice!

Liam Mcdaid

November 10, 2014 at 9:36 AM

love the picture demetrios this drew for me excellent pen dear friend

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 10, 2014 at 10:53 AM

How many times in our lives that everything appears to be fine, the unexpected comes? Thank you my friend, Liam, for your kind visit and comment!

Richard Lamoureux

November 10, 2014 at 1:46 AM

It is good to keep a watchful eye, I will heed your advice.

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 10, 2014 at 10:51 AM

Well, Richard, we all should keep a watchful eye! Thank you my friend for taking the time to visit!

Dorian Petersen Potter

November 8, 2014 at 2:29 AM

Beautifully penned, Demetrios! Much enjoyed my dear friend. :) love n hugs ! xxx D.

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 8, 2014 at 2:40 AM

Thank you, Dorian, my good friend! Love and hugs to you too!

Matthew Anish

November 7, 2014 at 11:47 PM

You issue a stern, important warning in this work. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 8, 2014 at 1:08 AM

Thank you for appreciating the message, dear Matthew! Peace & Blessings to you too!

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 7, 2014 at 4:08 AM

- There will always be something to fear .... but important to have hopes and dreams - A great haiku my dear friend Demetrios :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 7, 2014 at 5:27 AM

Thank you my friend, Anne-Lise, for your kind visit and constructive comment!