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Beware

Children frockling Sunshine, blue gums, Billabong Crocodile lurking. Billabong: A streambed filled with water only in the rainy season

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/26/2011 7:25:00 PM
This is soooooo cute. I love the way it goes from the joy of children playing to the thought of a lurking croc. Thank you for telling me what a billabong is... I heard the word on Crocodile Dundee but never knew what it meant. Please keep up your unique talent.
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Date: 11/26/2011 7:20:00 PM
For the amazing woman in the red beret....I love this haiku even more since I've had an Australian acquaint me with its beauty! Been working hard past couple days...will catch up with all your latest and greatest stuff very soon. Gwendolen
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Date: 11/26/2011 6:50:00 AM
Chomp!
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Date: 11/26/2011 12:38:00 AM
Lizzie,, avery creepy thought... the lurking... a nice haiku though... well not the crocodile.. they don't give a lovely image...lol.. thanks..p.d.
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