Between You and Me

wow you sure get the emotions going, Elizabeth, and that is not the only strength you portray, in your wonderful poetry...

Happiness well remembered, and pondered and then forgotten.'... 'tis better to have loved and lost' '...don't worry, be happy! I am the king of cliche today! :)

ahh, so sweet,,,i like drowned in your eyes when i hold your hand,,so romantic,,,holding this moment,,,wow............

Congrats on your win...a remembered ecstasy..............George

Elizabeth congrats on your win,.David

Congratulations I am sending you for your win in Kristen's "The Love of Your Life" contest Elizabeth. Love, Carol

Congrats on your win with this piece. Soft and sincere. Rosalyn

Very touching write. An adventure into the romances of life i must say. Well written and described!

Between the realms of infinity. Lies all the hearts possibilities. Where romantic love can make you whole. And leave you empty down to your soul. But I won't leave you high and dry. For kindness is how we can fly. Together sharing back and forth. We'll follow loves compass's true north.

Sad romantic write but good

Wonderful write must have been your husband..I know how you feel..beautiful flowing write with great metaphors...with love....old Jack

his eyes are mesmerizing.....enjoyed reading your works today....excellent writes as usual.

Hmmmm...makes me wonder, makes me dream. What is it dear lady you really mean? (I love this one - I really do:) Elizabeth, you have a way of capturing the essence of a thought, feeling or memory with minimal fluff. Kinda like shooting a bow & arrow with a blindfold on! You're always right on target. And thanks for reading & commenting earlier. I can count on you like the sky is blue:) Terry

Elizabeth, this is beautifully written and I can relate to the feelings you describe. Sometimes we just have to break away from those who make us feel sad. It's not easy, but there sometimes are silver linings behind "dark clouds" like the man you describe. Love and blessings, Carolyn

Alway like the written rhymes, always like the writes, alway like the kind commenting, always like to read your works and in most cases draw a little inpiration as well. Wonderful penning.

Nicely written Lizzie. Tony

A romantic write with a tinge of sadness...enjoyed very much.

certainly very deep and moving, liz

Between you and me, this is a classic. One of the best romantics i've read.

Smile, *^_^* “Again I Find This Melancholies Tone & I Can Only Say That This Does Not Have to Be If, The Future Tis Always What We See *^_^* My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Elizabeth! *^_^* I Love The Fact That Not Only Is Your Beauty Such A Gifted Poetess But Also That Your Loveliness, Seems to Be Able to Reach Sooo Very Deep Yet, Perhaps Not Quite As High *^_^* Eternity Waits Its Breath As Paradise Smiles, My Dear &, Thank You, for The Kind & Sweet Visit!” === My Love Unto Your Lovely Treasures, Always & Forever, Jasper *

I love this one, Liz. The next to the last line is so thought provoking. LOve, daver

the power of love, captured within your lines, and in his eyes, he fills your soul with so much love, expressed in this verse for the imagination to ponder.

lovely work...sounds like a special bond...TAH

You have painted great imagery here in a perplexing poem! I love the line, "which were, are not and perhaps will never be", profound and wonderfully written! Another awesome poem!!

The romantic tie that binds. Beautifully writ.