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Between You and Him

he has conveyed at times that life has disappointed him without saying it in words he longs for more than an ordinary life and a wife who does what he says no need for the little thrills and flourishes and warmth one would perfer to offer his spouse is a taboo subject most of the time until he brings it up their lives are centered in different worlds as they have become virtual strangers his entire life seemed to be a peeling-off process no one was entering everyone ws exiting his own life seemed to devour him it was unsalvagable he was momumentally depressed but felt a need to go to confession there was a knot of angst in his stomach but at the same time he had a lighter heart and a clearer head he felt human again no longer did he feel powerless and defenseless what was it what had happened it was like he caught his second wind look up look around you He's there He's everywhere the powers in us all all it takes is a personal phone call to Him and a forgiveness of sins to make us feel whole again

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Date: 6/11/2009 7:44:00 AM
I am not sure Brandy, but do I detect a certain irony in this poem.... ? Dunno might be me, is confession really just a phone call to forgiveness ?
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Date: 6/10/2009 1:07:00 PM
Another wonderful piece from you that captures the human emotions in its truest form...well done..keep on doing the thing.
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Date: 6/10/2009 12:16:00 PM
Been thru That
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Date: 6/10/2009 10:46:00 AM
Smile~Ahh yes, I see that "The Light Is Still Glowing Brightly Within 'You' Brandy Megens!!!":):)~And what a wonderful light it truly is; for those whom shall believe....I always knew "God" had "You" here for a purpose~So keep shining bright--As if "You" could not...."Warmth & Love Always To You & Your Loves, John!!"~"Have A Very Beautiful Day!!!:):) Bye ~
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