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Between Two Seasons

autumn crisp, bright drifting, cooling, turning leaf-lined days meet pale horizons settling, quieting, deepening still, silver winter
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Kamoonpuri Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 11:40 PM
A lovely lively beautiful autumn poem in fab format as well. Kudos! Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
Hind Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 8:06 PM
lovely <3
Goldsmith Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 11:51 AM
What a wonderful write/picture. Your few words say soooooo much. Have a fun day writing away............
Griffiths Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 7:29 AM
Great idea to do a diamante transitioning one season into another, and you have really pulled it off!
Poet Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 6:06 AM
Your short poem elegantly captures the transition from autumn to winter. The imagery is crisp and evocative, perfectly portraying the seasonal change. It’s a peaceful and reflective piece that stirs the senses, Sara.
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September 8, 2026 at 5:24 AM
A beautifully balanced seasonal diamante. The mirrored structure gently carries autumn into winter, while “leaf-lined days meet pale horizons” forms a lovely, luminous bridge between the two.🍂❄️
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