Between Then and Now

BETWEEN THEN AND NOW
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Let's find eternity in a day it's here, right here in this fluid moment , an hour, a day, a week, a month ignore all these intervals for they're really all just a heartbeat long. They say, so often now that it must be a cliché, how hard is it to love and lose not just him, but a part of the self as well? But hope is a powerful potion and when the same betrayal happens in different ways multiple times, it eats into the soul leaving me but to wonder:
Am I broken? Perhaps, I can shake the wounds and click my heels and still dare...
I'll nod, smile, and agree with the stars that while my popped veins are screaming, there is still a charmed chance whispered to me once broken, twice broken, pray tell, why should I try for a third time? For hope is indeed a powerful potion though fear may be stronger, as pierced memories are knives embedded far deeper snaking their way into the depths of wilted flower beds, of a look, a smile, a question on a dance floor… that pause between then and now. Just flow, let’s find eternity in a day time means nothing when hours turn to seconds, an hour, a day, a week, a month , ignore all these intervals for when my fingers become tapered candles … Life becomes wrapped up into one ball of wax. ----------©----------all rights reserved
Michael Falotico's " Close Your Eyes and Click Your Heels" By: nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
September 6, 2011 at 8:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement Nette. Love, Carol
M V Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 9:33 AM
Congratulations on great win!Nette
Minardi Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 10:10 AM
Congrats, Nette. Deep write here, dear. :)
Williams Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 3:58 AM
hey Nette congrats on your great win..David
Ramsdale Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 3:07 AM
A Ninth Place Win Congratulations. CR
Quigley Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 12:26 AM
You took me with you nette. Well done and congratulations
Villanueva Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 10:36 PM
CONGRATULATIONS~~~~your every win is a symbol of expertise in writing poetic art~~~smile my friend nette~~~*-*jun-jun
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September 2, 2011 at 7:30 PM
Congrats my dear Nette!! Thank you for your always supporting work...luv Michael
Sweetheart Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 7:15 PM
Congrats Nette luv on your sensational win with this spectacular poetry my friend.. another awesome selection for excellence in writing and creativity sweetie.. luv..enjoy..
Anish Avatar
August 28, 2011 at 11:32 PM
"Time is the stream I go fishing in" - Pythagoras. Well done poetry - and you were smart enough to copyright it. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Kendrick Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 12:03 PM
Interesting work..If for a contest, good luck..Reads like a winner to me..Your presence at my work is uplifting.Sara
Lane Avatar
August 25, 2011 at 6:45 AM
Thoughtful and moving Nette. Tony
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