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Between Then and Now

BETWEEN THEN AND NOW ””””””``````````”””””””
Let's find eternity in a day it's here, right here in this fluid moment , an hour, a day, a week, a month ignore all these intervals for they're really all just a heartbeat long. They say, so often now that it must be a cliché, how hard is it to love and lose not just him, but a part of the self as well? But hope is a powerful potion and when the same betrayal happens in different ways multiple times, it eats into the soul leaving me but to wonder:
Am I broken? Perhaps, I can shake the wounds and click my heels and still dare...
I'll nod, smile, and agree with the stars that while my popped veins are screaming, there is still a charmed chance whispered to me once broken, twice broken, pray tell, why should I try for a third time? For hope is indeed a powerful potion though fear may be stronger, as pierced memories are knives embedded far deeper snaking their way into the depths of wilted flower beds, of a look, a smile, a question on a dance floor… that pause between then and now. Just flow, let’s find eternity in a day time means nothing when hours turn to seconds, an hour, a day, a week, a month , ignore all these intervals for when my fingers become tapered candles … Life becomes wrapped up into one ball of wax. ----------©----------all rights reserved
Michael Falotico's " Close Your Eyes and Click Your Heels" By: nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/6/2011 8:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/4/2011 9:33:00 AM
Congratulations on great win!Nette
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Date: 9/3/2011 10:10:00 AM
Congrats, Nette. Deep write here, dear. :)
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Date: 9/3/2011 3:58:00 AM
hey Nette congrats on your great win..David
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Date: 9/3/2011 3:07:00 AM
A Ninth Place Win Congratulations. CR
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Date: 9/3/2011 12:26:00 AM
You took me with you nette. Well done and congratulations
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Date: 9/2/2011 10:36:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS~~~~your every win is a symbol of expertise in writing poetic art~~~smile my friend nette~~~*-*jun-jun
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Date: 9/2/2011 7:30:00 PM
Congrats my dear Nette!! Thank you for your always supporting work...luv Michael
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Date: 9/2/2011 7:15:00 PM
Congrats Nette luv on your sensational win with this spectacular poetry my friend.. another awesome selection for excellence in writing and creativity sweetie.. luv..enjoy..
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Date: 8/28/2011 11:32:00 PM
"Time is the stream I go fishing in" - Pythagoras. Well done poetry - and you were smart enough to copyright it. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/25/2011 12:03:00 PM
Interesting work..If for a contest, good luck..Reads like a winner to me..Your presence at my work is uplifting.Sara
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Date: 8/25/2011 6:45:00 AM
Thoughtful and moving Nette. Tony
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