Between Sleep and Giddyup

half past five - coffee between sleep and giddyup eight - another cup sleep til nine - next day set not the alarm, morrow jumping beans - must catch up nah, forget extra need to catch up - exercise stretch, bend, reach for sun away with caffeine surely a nap is in store but not on the road put the grinds away the moon dictates - stay in bag pour me into bed early hour - coffee attack that bag with fervor sip and sip and write And pondering the potential subject coffee ignores politics and turns to family between light and dark cream or black, the sip of life Christ at the center
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Buhagiar Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 2:10 AM
Great, you put Christ at the centre. Avoid caffeine; not good for your health. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 5:47 AM
Christ always at the center! Yes, need to limit caffeine. Usually a cup in the morning. :)
Crandall Avatar
September 1, 2024 at 11:26 AM
The short, quick phrases go well with the coffee
Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 5:53 AM
Thank you, David! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2024 at 5:48 AM
Thank you, David! :)
Wolf Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 8:07 PM
'the sip of life' - I like that phrase. And 'the sip' is vital, I think. To sip coffee, not to gulp it, is helpful, at least for me. If I pour myself two cups a day, I actually down less than 1/2 that amount, because I just sip it... And one can only sip for so long... They called Wilt Chamberlin 'The Big Dipper.' I'm the 'Little Sipper.' :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
September 1, 2024 at 6:21 AM
LOL…so funny, Gershon!
Greenhough Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 4:09 PM
Your busy life has true belief as seen in your poem. Thank you for sharing this light.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 7:20 PM
Thank you, Hilda! :)
May Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 2:06 PM
Keen on caffeine to give you that jolt, I like a nice cup in the morning
Rodrigues Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 7:20 PM
It is a nice way to start the day :) Have a great evening, Joe!
Hind Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 9:43 AM
I am drinking coffee right now, lol! Loved this interesting piece, dear Kim. <3
Rodrigues Avatar
August 31, 2024 at 7:21 PM
Awesome! Thank you, Paige!
Cunningham Avatar
August 30, 2024 at 10:35 AM
You're an early riser like me Kim, first thing I have is coffee, gets my engines moving. Although retired I was always up at 04.00 the deadmans hour and can't break the habit. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
August 30, 2024 at 12:26 PM
I like rising early. Waste not the day! Hugs, sweet friend!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 30, 2024 at 8:49 AM
What a fun coffee write. Now I am tired from reading this. Hahaha!!!  Have a fun day with your coffee as you write way...................
Rodrigues Avatar
August 30, 2024 at 12:27 PM
Thanks, Paula! I always enjoy having you pop in! Hugs!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace