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Between Love and Hate

Is there a name for that place we go Between love and hate but are afraid to show The place where smiles turn into tears And one more day turns into years Do you know that place where someone's touch Unexplainably turns from pleasure to pain Of this place do you know of such Where blue skies fall like rain Where the playful wink becomes a stare And the light you see in their eye becomes a glare The heartfelt kisses of long ago Now a peck on the cheek just for show Trusting each other becomes suspicions untold Never each other again to hold The I love you becomes I don't care The same dreams you no longer share Is that place fear or maybe despair When you realize they no longer care Is there a name for that place we go Between love and hate but are afraid to show ©Donna Jones

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Date: 3/20/2013 10:12:00 PM
Dear Donna, I'm having Computer Problems I can't seem to send Soup Mail now I Promise to send Tomorrow I Apologize. Have a Good night I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry Please read MY Series POEMS Title "The Heart of a POET - Speaks" Parts 1-4. begins on page 10 and continues on page 9 Thank-YOU
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Donna Jones
Date: 3/21/2013 10:45:00 AM
Well I certainly appreciate the kind words and am going now to read these fine works....Donna
Date: 3/20/2013 9:18:00 PM
Dear Donna, "Sitting""in a dusty old" "Notebook"" afraid People would laugh" I have to agree with Jack "Stop that Nonsense" Only the ignorant, uneducated dolts would laugh and then they wouldn;t know what their laughing at.Here at the SOUP You will hear nothing but Praise and advice. I am going to write that reply Soup Mail now I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry
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Date: 3/20/2013 9:40:00 PM
You leave me speechless. Which is hard to do...thanks....Harry.....always Donna
Date: 2/12/2013 11:53:00 AM
A very powerful presentation of the 'vainishing point' of emotional vacillation, the quiet pendullum that swings our minds mad when we've 'had too much of a good thing', when we forget how and why to appreciate other people's evolution - I think deficits of imagination have alot to do with disharmony Donna - very mature style you have, great philosophical literature - J.A.B. %
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/12/2013 1:21:00 PM
Thanks again Justin I appreciate it so much....blessings
Date: 2/2/2013 4:18:00 PM
Donna, a beautiful blessings with your creative top featured poem of the week. Take care and have yourself an excellent day... I know I sure am. :-) or should I say I will at least try. Always~ & ~ Forever*LINDA
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Date: 2/2/2013 5:21:00 PM
Well as you can see above here I just replied to myself. I don't know what I'm doing yet and thank you but I don't know what featured poem of week is, sorry. But thanks. Have a great weekend yourself. Blessings also.
Date: 2/1/2013 9:46:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry this evening, very interesting write, hope there is more love than hate, peace debra
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Date: 2/2/2013 2:32:00 PM
Yes comes and goes in all lives, we must choose to look for the beauty, we have that choice. Thanks for reading my poem.
Date: 1/23/2013 9:18:00 AM
Very nice, Donna. I think this one is the best I have seen in a while and your personal best so far. Great concept, good meter and natural rhyme. Cheers, Roy
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Date: 1/23/2013 9:51:00 AM
Thanks alot . I'll pull another one out of the dusty old notebook and hope you like it also. Encouragement from others sure helps have a great day
Date: 1/22/2013 8:24:00 PM
"afraid people would laugh"... stop that nonsense! Nobody is going to laugh... only encourage! That's what we do here on Poetry Soup! I can surely understand how you feel though. It's kinda scary until you get your feet wet! You are a very talented writer my dear Miss Donna! Hugs, Jack
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Date: 1/22/2013 9:21:00 PM
You are a kind man thanks. Next time one of my young nephews are around I will get their help getting my pic on so all you out there can see this okie gal till then I'll play the mystery lady and so much appreciate your support in something that has until now only been a notebook of daily life
Date: 1/22/2013 12:21:00 PM
deep' SandyIvy
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Date: 1/22/2013 4:52:00 PM
Thanks and I hope as young as you look here you never experience this ever long love and all your dreams come true
Date: 1/21/2013 8:52:00 PM
superb write... thanks for sharing your brilliant thought :) <3
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Donna Jones
Date: 1/21/2013 9:38:00 PM
Thank you for your kind compliment ...All your dreams come true

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