Krish Radhakrishna Poet Rhyme

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What's In A Number Poetry Contest
4th placement in the contest

Bible, Koran and Torah day of creation of solar system

Gita Chapter on Transcendental nature of god  

outer space dimensions according to Einstein

number of seasons

number of elements according to ancient philosophers

Vicks formula cough mixture

Directions that make NEWS

on clock quarter past every hour

 

 

 

 

 

Between 3 and 5

If you square two and take away from eight,
In the month of April that is my birth date!
Write month-date as lucky angels dictate, 
like a pair of akimbo dancers on ice skates!

This unique number occurs every where!
bottle of Indian cough mixture? it is there!
All around in North, East, South and West, 
And in earth, water, sky, air you may test!

On the clock face two stop to bottom,
count summer, winter, spring, autumn!
This divine number has its rightful place,
Bible, Gita, Koran,Torah, outer space!

Am I not lucky to be born on such a date,
That holy number twice my cake decorates?
With reverence I blow candle each summer,
to seek good luck from the angelic number!

Written 23-02/2020
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Paul Callus March 2, 2020 at 4:58 PM A very good take on the "invisible number 4" theme, Krish! Had you been able to see into the future, you would have included your placement in the contest, too:) Congratulations! Regards // paul Krish Radhakrishna March 2, 2020 at 6:37 PM Thanks! Yes,indeed! My thoughts were similar when I saw the result! But others were better! Regards Paul.:)

Juliet Ligon February 29, 2020 at 7:44 PM Congratulations on your placement in my "What's In A Number" contest! Lots of great ideas. I can see the number four throughout these four quatrains. Krish Radhakrishna February 29, 2020 at 9:28 PM Thank you Juliet! What an amazing topic you chose! Delighted to get a placement!