between

the sun is setting slowly
leaving the marks 
      at the corner
 of  Kappabashi Street
maikos adorned
         brightly with
 lantern lights
while 
   the midnight 
        wind is blowing
                    languidly
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Goff Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 5:55 AM
Setting ...visual...feeling...lovely art, Koyoto... thanks!
Harada Avatar
May 1, 2024 at 1:10 PM
arigatou
Rodgers Avatar
April 3, 2024 at 7:24 PM
Hello Kyoto, I liked how your words create a serene picture of transition, capturing the delicate balance between day and night. As the sun sets over Kappabashi Street, the maikos, adorned in lantern lights, embody a sense of elegance and grace. The gentle breeze of the midnight wind adds to the tranquil atmosphere, creating a moment of peaceful contemplation. Your reflection on this fleeting moment to image of the beauty in the spaces between, where time seems to stand still. Blessings, Daniel
Harada Avatar
April 8, 2024 at 1:13 AM
arigatou
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