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the sun is setting slowly leaving the marks at the corner of Kappabashi Street maikos adorned brightly with lantern lights while the midnight wind is blowing languidly

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/22/2024 5:55:00 AM

Setting ...visual...feeling...lovely art, Koyoto... thanks!

Koyoto Harada
Date: 5/1/2024 1:10:00 PM

arigatou

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/3/2024 7:24:00 PM

Hello Kyoto, I liked how your words create a serene picture of transition, capturing the delicate balance between day and night. As the sun sets over Kappabashi Street, the maikos, adorned in lantern lights, embody a sense of elegance and grace. The gentle breeze of the midnight wind adds to the tranquil atmosphere, creating a moment of peaceful contemplation. Your reflection on this fleeting moment to image of the beauty in the spaces between, where time seems to stand still. Blessings, Daniel

Koyoto Harada
Date: 4/8/2024 1:13:00 AM

arigatou

Tom Woody

Date: 4/3/2024 7:32:00 AM

Beautiful nature vista

Koyoto Harada
Date: 4/8/2024 1:13:00 AM

arigatou