Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Verse

- Better World For All -

                   Behind the seven great mountains with sugar tops on
              There lies the valley where there is only love and happiness
                      There are not many who know these mountains
                       and rather few people know about this valley
                     The birds are singing so beautiful all year round
                  The flowers make themselves attractive to all the bees
                        People live in a wonderful harmony with love
                      No unfriendliness, no jealousy, no hard feelings
            This valley is like a little mini paradise, where everyone is happy
                      In happiness and love grow only the best of the best
                I've been searching for this valley all my life without finding it
               If we all were looking together maybe we will find a better world






22.01.2013
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Nette Onclaud May 30, 2013 at 2:28 AM i hit on a jackpot wjile searching for some poems i haven't read yet, anne.. this paradise exists if we all make it so; what a splendid write with lines that flow... you inspire!..;) huggs Anne-Lise Andresen May 30, 2013 at 2:36 AM Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Nette. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Nette Onclaud May 30, 2013 at 2:29 AM and sweet congrats!..:)

Red Omara March 13, 2013 at 3:38 PM What a beautiful thought about a beautiful place, Anne Lise. I'd love you to find it. - Red Anne-Lise Andresen March 13, 2013 at 4:11 PM Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Red. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan March 2, 2013 at 1:51 PM Well, Anne, I will go with you in search, and we shall have a grand time on our journey to this magical place ;} Anne-Lise Andresen March 3, 2013 at 2:23 AM We must look into our hearts and become better people, Debbie. - - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman February 26, 2013 at 1:12 PM Sounds like a wonderful place, Anne-Lise! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Anne-Lise Andresen February 26, 2013 at 1:18 PM Thanks for congratulations, Kim! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Connie Gildersleeve February 25, 2013 at 6:07 PM Congratulation on your win. Nicely done Anne. Connie Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2013 at 11:20 PM Thanks for congratulations, Connie! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David Williams February 25, 2013 at 1:42 PM Anna Lise congrats on your win with this little gem, great idyllic picture...David Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2013 at 1:43 PM Thanks for congratulations, David! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Painted Hunter February 25, 2013 at 7:19 AM Lemme know if you come across it! Congrats! Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2013 at 7:23 AM Thanks for congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A February 24, 2013 at 9:40 PM Anne, , thank you for SUPPORTING MY NEWEST contest...CONGRATULATIONS on your awesome win ;-) LINDA Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2013 at 7:23 AM Thanks for congratulations! - Thanks for letting me join. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sukmawati Komala February 19, 2013 at 8:37 PM my fav poetess Anne lise :) thank you for sharing your amazing talent :) enjoyed so much your great sharing <3 much luv and hugs :) Sk Anne-Lise Andresen February 20, 2013 at 12:49 AM - <3- Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Sukmawati. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Dan Kearley February 12, 2013 at 2:55 PM What a joy that would be..It's nice to feel the love <3 Anne-Lise Andresen February 13, 2013 at 1:40 AM Thanks for your kind visit and your comments, Dan. - oxox f.e.f. / / Anne-Lise :)

Saleem Durrani February 3, 2013 at 1:33 PM I just love the way you have so beautifully imagined how it would be, if we all could get together and search for this valley of paradise. The message is deep down in our hearts where we should be looking and then creating this passage for others to enter embrace and create a better world for all. Lovely poem Anne Lisa - oxoxo Anne-Lise Andresen February 3, 2013 at 2:03 PM You have interpreted my poem so good and right, Saleem. - - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

April Mitchell February 1, 2013 at 4:36 AM Message very powerful and the words well picked and brought together love this poem i hope others perceive it for what it means Anne-Lise Andresen February 1, 2013 at 5:50 AM It will also I hope, April. - We must look into our hearts and become better people. - - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock January 28, 2013 at 6:35 PM Lets hold hands and find this Utopia together. Lovely poem Anne-lise. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen January 29, 2013 at 2:41 AM We must look into our hearts and become better people, Phyllis. - - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich January 27, 2013 at 4:54 PM It's Shangri La!! Wish we could all find it, sweetie. Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2013 at 2:59 AM We must look into our hearts and become better people, Andrea. - - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carrie Richards January 27, 2013 at 3:39 PM Who would not want to live in this wonderful place....if only this were possible. But we can always hope that in the future there is a paradise such as this. :) Anne-Lise Andresen January 28, 2013 at 2:58 AM I hope everyone will find this "peaceful valley", Carrie. - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath January 26, 2013 at 10:42 AM Excellent expectation. My sweet friend, I feel there is a world of which your dream depicts. In our world, it's totally impossible at present due to hundreds of reasons. Where all the people are perfect there this world may be. Thanks for all the comments. Loved always, bl Anne-Lise Andresen January 26, 2013 at 11:18 AM We must look into our hearts and become better people, bl. - - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Vesna Kovrlija January 25, 2013 at 4:37 AM Your beautiful poem describes a beautiful place. Anne-Lise Andresen January 25, 2013 at 4:43 AM I hope everyone will find this "peaceful valley", Vesna. - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Audrey Haick January 24, 2013 at 5:30 PM I also wish we could find that valley here, Anne Lise..that day will come! It's a wonderful poem but a heart that loves. Great job! Love and hugs, Annalise Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2013 at 6:57 PM We must look into our hearts and become better people, Annalise. - - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Wilma Neels January 24, 2013 at 9:49 AM So true Anne Lise, this is such a beautiful gem. So much promise as well. I hope your week has been a great one thus far. Have a fab weekend ahead ;) love & hugs Wilma xxx Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2013 at 11:09 AM A good place to be, wish the world was "free" for weapons and war. - Thank you for taking the time to read it, Wilma. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan January 24, 2013 at 7:43 AM Shangri-La? I hope you find it. If you do, please let me know where it is. I would love to live there. Jack Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2013 at 11:09 AM I hope everyone will find this "peaceful valley", Jack . - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway January 24, 2013 at 7:08 AM Nice to live in this place... so cool, so peaceful..a very beautiful image you paint my dear Anne Lise. thanks for sharing..Hugs, Maria :) Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2013 at 7:12 AM A good place to be, wish the world was "free" for weapons and war. - Thank you for taking the time to read it, Maria. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Yanny Widjanarko January 24, 2013 at 4:06 AM I eagerly want to be the part of that valley, must be a great life to have an environment like that :D really nice inspiration Anne, I enjoyed to read this poem :) - hug, yanny Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2013 at 6:28 AM I hope everyone will find this "peaceful valley", Yanny. - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Cecilia Macfarlane January 23, 2013 at 5:19 PM If we all were looking for these sweet sentiments, we would already be living in that wonderful valley.....beautiful write Anne-Lise! Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen January 24, 2013 at 2:37 AM We must look into our hearts and become better people, Cecilia. - - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carol Eastman January 23, 2013 at 2:43 PM Very interesting and thought provoking poem... I want to find it too. Anne-Lise Andresen January 23, 2013 at 3:03 PM I hope everyone will find this "peaceful valley",Carol. - Thank you for taking the time to read it. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Larisa Rzhepishevska January 23, 2013 at 2:29 PM Enjoyed reading your poem Anne. You are so right! Best wishes, Larisa Anne-Lise Andresen January 23, 2013 at 3:02 PM A good place to be, wish the world was "free" for weapons and war. - Thank you for taking the time to read it, Larisa. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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