Better Than Him

You said you’re in love to my friend
Can’t you see I’m better than him?
I can get shining stars  night
Give big pearls that truly light.

He has sports car that you like
You like seeing him wearing Nike
I can do whatever you want
I can be Brad Pitt if you really want.

He used to give you flowers and a spice
You think he’s generous and so nice
I can make your world shine!
Be in my arms and be my “Mine”.

You think he’s  perfect for you
He has looks and wealth that you love too
I’m better than a good friend of mine
Give me a chance and spend me your time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Leake Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 2:27 AM
nicely written Lei, Enjoyed your poetry Have a nice day Best wishes Kevin
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace