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Better Days

Clouds darken furiously Tears saturate the earth The sun shines again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 5/29/2009 7:05:00 AM
For such is life that we may hope ... the sun comes again tomorrow ... and tomorrow always come. Nice haiku
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Date: 12/5/2008 9:09:00 PM
Des Juan - how come you do not write more poetry? This is a brilliant haiku - loved the second line especially. Peace always and may you and your loved ones have a Happy & Healthy Holiday season. John
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Date: 11/8/2008 2:43:00 PM
"old drill sergeants speeches/ rants!" lol
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Date: 9/2/2008 6:45:00 AM
Such an excellent haiku. Love the hopeful ending. Love, Shar
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Date: 9/1/2008 11:40:00 AM
Hi Des Juan, I like the similies in this write, it gives one a mental picture, and put a smile on my face, glad to see u back metaphorically speaking, take caer always, D-nyce
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Date: 9/1/2008 5:11:00 AM
Yes, and always shall it be...beautiful in vision and message, love Kristin
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