Better Days

Clouds darken furiously
	Tears saturate the earth
The sun shines again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Shango Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 7:05 AM
For such is life that we may hope ... the sun comes again tomorrow ... and tomorrow always come. Nice haiku
Heck Avatar
December 5, 2008 at 9:09 PM
Des Juan - how come you do not write more poetry? This is a brilliant haiku - loved the second line especially. Peace always and may you and your loved ones have a Happy & Healthy Holiday season. John
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November 8, 2008 at 2:43 PM
"old drill sergeants speeches/ rants!" lol
Winter Avatar
September 2, 2008 at 6:45 AM
Such an excellent haiku. Love the hopeful ending. Love, Shar
White Avatar
September 1, 2008 at 11:40 AM
Hi Des Juan, I like the similies in this write, it gives one a mental picture, and put a smile on my face, glad to see u back metaphorically speaking, take caer always, D-nyce
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September 1, 2008 at 5:11 AM
Yes, and always shall it be...beautiful in vision and message, love Kristin
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