Better At Hiding - Kib

Better at hiding- KIB




Imbued in vast ocean of grief, 
as emotions dig deep ;
Heart pounces on my soul,
I bid adieu to a great dad ;
Tears scroll down in miffed sleep ...
Lunar tides go tranquil.



For “Keep it brief” poetry contest 
Sponsor- nette onclaud
Written August 5, 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Inman Avatar
August 31, 2019 at 9:30 PM
A lovely emotional write Dr Sharma.
Sergi Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 5:57 PM
Hi Dr.Upma; A brief but sincere poem of your dear dad. My deepest condolences.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 2:29 AM
Appreciate your kind visit Ralph.
Dietrich Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 4:06 PM
a very touching poem. Congrats on the placement
A. Sharma Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 2:25 AM
Thnx for ur sweet words Andrea !
Onclaud Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 3:31 PM
a solid poem woven in a deep sense of melancholia, upma...thanks for supporting my contest and big congrats!
A. Sharma Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 2:25 AM
So glad u liked this one nette..
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