Better

Im feeling better than before
Now that i opened up the door

I ran outside to see the light
I must admit, it was really bright

I can thank one person for my raise in joy
I one person whos mind is as beautiful as Helen of Troy

She told me to pass it on
So i will until the day im gone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 28, 2009 at 3:03 PM
Very pretty......
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