Betsy

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My only true love Betsy and, I are away for a day out down by the sea shore 
Both of us holding hands, I am with a lass, I am sure I will love forever more

The innocence in her laughter, as we draw our names and hearts in the sand 
Taking me far away from the troubled hell, I’ve seen in a far and distant land

Where within the wetted green grass - lies a ground soaked all in bloody red
Thousands upon thousands of my fellow man all piled upon each other dead 

These deaths leave a silence - that is more than deafening on my closed ears
As the mist of the mustard gas clears yet still stings my eyes brought to tears 

Each face of the dead leaving behind an expression either of torture or peace
Lives given for their country now lie upon the rubble mounds of soil & grease

Each face whiten beyond the pale, photos of loved ones trodden in the shale  
As back home the M.O.D write the dreaded words put their letters in the mail

But here I'm with Betsy on our own beloved sea shore, innocence beautified
As far as possible, I keep her from the brutality of our young men’s genocide

As I listen to her laughter, as I look into her eyes of the lightest emerald green
It all helps to take away the horrors of a bloody war I wished I had never seen

I am going to marry my beloved Betsy, have beautiful children, three, or four
But never as in never, will I tell my children of the brutality of this bloody war

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/26/2017 2:57:00 PM
Others may not comment, they don't know what to say, but for me myself, I'm going off now to pray. Thanks for sharing "those moments" with all of us on the soup. oldbuck
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Date: 9/27/2017 11:49:00 AM
Greeting "Buck" from across the water - Appreciate your comment where others fear to tread - More prays needed for our hero dead . . . -_-
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