Betrayed By Her Heart (My Ending)

He knew his love betrayed him before he walked into the door
Her nervous behavior indicated that she still loved him
Or so he hoped.
He dipped a finger in her glass and moistened her lips 
Before gently pressing his against her quivering mouth
Her moan was enough
He knew
This was the moment
When it would all be revealed
The longing….
The passion….
He knew….
He had to see a doctor about his problem 
That made him reach the climax of mount Everest before the act of love….


originally Writen by Wilma Neels
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 6:34 PM
A nice flight of imagination on love and its sentiments, Sidney
Sweetheart Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 6:22 PM
U got me again Sidney... great last line... hope u have entered my Alliteration contest..only a few spots left to win a $50.00 visa gift card luv...
Neels Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 6:13 PM
Hehe see what I mean? You totally took it in a different direction, I love it! Shame poor guy the anticipation was just too much lol
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