Betrayed

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Your lying eyes and misleading smile.
Your darlings and my dears, so insincere.
You speak my name when I'm not there
but it's not to say you loved me.

Why tell me lies and live a life so false
and give me hope, your such a fake.
And placate with that laugh of yours
and fictitious lies I love you. 

Well I.ve been told I know the score
your deception been discovered 
and I've invested in our love my dear
A Gun I've bought, a trigger pulled.

 And now my dear you are know more.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 11/21/2016 12:06:00 PM
what a twist.. fine write, stephen..huggs
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 11/21/2016 12:15:00 PM
cheers nette , driven to distraction and jealousy stephen :-)
Date: 11/21/2016 8:17:00 AM
Guns only create more problems, kill' em with kindness:) Fun read, Stephen:)
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 11/21/2016 8:23:00 AM
agreed Daniel re guns , i could sing to her or if she really upset me recite one of my poems
Date: 11/21/2016 6:11:00 AM
Very interesting write ... superb ending ...
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 11/21/2016 8:12:00 AM
jealousy strikes Prodir stephen
Date: 11/21/2016 5:08:00 AM
WOW! Epic poem! That was a twist. Great Write.
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 11/21/2016 8:11:00 AM
cheers I do like to have a punch line cheers
Date: 11/21/2016 3:54:00 AM
Wow, did not expect that; very strong emotional content. Good write Stephen.
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 11/21/2016 4:21:00 AM
keep an eye on the lady's phil lol cheers
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