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Betrayed

drowning in a golden dream, cotton candy, silken cream, gilded waves of peace and prose, god of sun and warmth. extinguished flame, but briefly so, resting, while the tide is low. pacing in a lucid ebb, and flow of of yonder repeat. flaxen ember, cerealuean sparks, silent, now, in whispered dark. oozing into sacred spots...comforting the wounded dead. tempting the icy, moon drenched soul, sharing bubbles, champagne and more. opal sand and incense petals, that bind the hands that hold. wings that cradle the tortured shell, comfort and fold beneath the swells. of all thats real, but who are we? to question all thats right. jaded warrior, golden god. sapphire soul and unwilling bard. promise me just one second more, of your breath, your life, your soul. meant to be, yet nevermore. a subtle sigh, legend and lore. light and life and air and breath, where, before, was none. and forbid the shore where footprints die. curse the clouds which regret. to cry.  and know, that as you fade away, for one, two, souls have been betrayed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/9/2013 12:34:00 PM
Evonne, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Evonne Van Gundy
Date: 7/9/2013 1:42:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 7/6/2013 3:00:00 PM
This is a great write. My favorite line: "promise me just one second more, of your breath, your life, your soul." Love it!
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Evonne Van Gundy
Date: 7/9/2013 1:42:00 PM
Thank you :)

Book: Shattered Sighs