Betrayed

drowning in a golden dream, 
cotton candy, silken cream, 
gilded waves of peace and 
prose, god of sun and warmth.
extinguished flame, but briefly 
so, resting, while the tide is 
low. pacing in a lucid ebb, and 
flow of of yonder repeat.
flaxen ember, cerealuean 
sparks, silent, now, in 
whispered dark. oozing into 
sacred spots...comforting the 
wounded dead.
tempting the icy, moon 
drenched soul, sharing bubbles, 
champagne and more. opal 
sand and incense petals, that 
bind the hands that hold.
wings that cradle the tortured 
shell, comfort and fold beneath 
the swells. of all thats real, but 
who are we? to question all 
thats right.
jaded warrior, golden god. 
sapphire soul and unwilling 
bard. promise me just one 
second more, of your breath, 
your life, your soul.

meant to be, yet nevermore. a 
subtle sigh, legend and lore. 
light and life and air and 
breath, where, before, was 
none.

and forbid the shore where 
footprints die.
curse the clouds which regret. 
to cry. 
and know, that as you fade 
away,
for one, two, souls have been 
betrayed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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July 9, 2013 at 12:34 PM
Evonne, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
Van Gundy Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 1:42 PM
Thank you :)
Gabriella Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 3:00 PM
This is a great write. My favorite line: "promise me just one second more, of your breath, your life, your soul." Love it!
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July 9, 2013 at 1:42 PM
Thank you :)
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