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Betrayed

You know how you get a feeling When someone is lying to you. But you keep making up excuses Telling yourself its not true. You convince yourself nothing happened, No matter what you may feel; Just close your eyes and pretend There was nothing to conceal. But in your heart you know That you have been betrayed; That nothing that he told you Was as simple as it was portrayed You keep beating yourself up With an ugly mental assault; Lost and wondering why, Convinced it was your fault Trying to figure out Just what was incomplete, To make him turn away To make him want to cheat.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/25/2010 2:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Tirzah. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/22/2010 10:45:00 AM
Tirzah; first off CONGRATS on your feature. This one is so full of truths! We've got to learn to listen to that inner voice and proceed accordingly. At the very moment we ignore or try to fight it our worlds are forever changed. Doubt, Guilt, Insecurities, and inevitable PAIN are the voices we start to hear. I love this poem...Goes in my Fav's... Lay
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Date: 12/22/2010 9:07:00 AM
"Just what was incomplete, To make him turn away To make him want to cheat?" - A man child is he who hasn't attained maturity. Plain and simple? He may be an adult physically but mentally he's still an immature baby. What was incomplete had nothing to do with you. You supported him and did all you could do. *TheKidsterWasHere*
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Date: 12/19/2010 4:53:00 PM
Congrats Tirzah on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a wonderful one to share with us all today with luv.. happy holidays to u and yours my friend...
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Date: 7/11/2010 7:05:00 AM
Dear Tirzah, You express YOUR Heart so Wonderfully in YOUR POETRY it makes one want to read More of YOUR Glorious POETRY I find YOUR writes enticing YOUR Liege ALWAYS. ..HG
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Date: 6/1/2010 1:15:00 PM
Never your fault.... people make bad choices every day... stay stong love......always Michael
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