Betrayal

again
she combs the woods 
through rain

pouring 
inside her heart
like sting

of glade
as damp lungs heave--
betrayed.



Contest: Whispers Of A Muse
Rora Onna
Nov 30  2014

betrayalpainverse

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

December 8, 2014 at 9:00 AM

Truly incredible write, Rora! Beautiful and deep images...congrats to you on a well deserved win!! Hugs, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

December 4, 2014 at 7:04 PM

this one is rather mysterious!! Congrats for your fine win.

Maurice Yvonne

December 3, 2014 at 7:14 PM

Congratulations on your win with this excellent write!

Poetiq1der Simmons

December 3, 2014 at 6:52 PM

Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...These verses are like Easy listening on the radio...Soft, beautiful, melodic, a tad suspenseful, sad, and final....Very nicely composed.