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Betrayal

again she combs the woods through rain pouring inside her heart like sting of glade as damp lungs heave-- betrayed. Contest: Whispers Of A Muse Rora Onna Nov 30 2014

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 12/8/2014 9:00:00 AM
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Truly incredible write, Rora! Beautiful and deep images...congrats to you on a well deserved win!! Hugs, Rhonda
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/4/2014 7:04:00 PM
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this one is rather mysterious!! Congrats for your fine win.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 12/3/2014 7:14:00 PM
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Congratulations on your win with this excellent write!
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Poetiq1der Simmons
Date: 12/3/2014 6:52:00 PM
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Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...These verses are like Easy listening on the radio...Soft, beautiful, melodic, a tad suspenseful, sad, and final....Very nicely composed.
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Paul Callus
Date: 12/3/2014 11:27:00 AM
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Powerful in expression and emotion. This of yours is a very deserved win; congratulations! // paul
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 12/3/2014 9:57:00 AM
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you took the theme to a different level, rora...melancholic and beautiful... thanks for being part of my contest with top congrats!
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/3/2014 9:24:00 AM
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very powerfully penned - many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 12/3/2014 9:00:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win Rora.
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/30/2014 5:11:00 PM
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Powerful verses! Good luck in the contest Rora! A 7 from me! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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