Betrayal

Friendship's worst enemy is betrayal, Trust's broken and is disabled, It all starts with a lie, And ends with a 'bye'. I think about the days, As u took advantage of me in many ways, But it's good for me anyway, Cause I have already learnt my lesson the hard way.

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Dennis Spilchuk

Date: 5/15/2022 8:38:00 AM

Interesting perspective on life lessons. As you indicated, you learned, and moved on. Wishing you the best. Take care.

Komal Walimbe
Date: 5/15/2022 8:51:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind comment! Yes I did! HAve a great day!:)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/8/2022 12:07:00 PM

Your "Betrayal" is a wonderful write. Friendship is gone with a lie. I do not understand why people/friendships need to lie. So wrong. Have a blessed day...............

Komal Walimbe
Date: 5/8/2022 9:02:00 PM

Yeah! I agree with you...Thank you so much for commenting on my poem glad you liked it!:)

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/21/2022 3:45:00 AM

"It all starts with a lie, And ends with a 'bye'. Great work on betrayal.

Komal Walimbe
Date: 3/21/2022 8:13:00 AM

Thank You Very Much for commenting! It just struck in my mind and fortunately it rhymed well...Have a great day:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2022 11:04:00 PM

you really caught that feeling. It's horrible when a friend does that. Well done.

Komal Walimbe
Date: 3/19/2022 9:15:00 AM

Yeah, it truly is! Thank you so much for commenting! Have a great day!

Valerie Staton

Date: 3/1/2022 5:16:00 AM

This was a lovely poem. Yes, life comes with many lessons. As you stated we must learn from them. Learn from them and move on to the next chapter of our lives. As I read this poem I thought of a gospel song we worship to in church which says "You got to let go and let God have His way."

Komal Walimbe
Date: 3/4/2022 6:47:00 AM

Oh! Thanks for the info...Though I am a teen and I have got many hurdles to confront in the future, I have learnt many lessons and learnt things the hard way ,but that's what has made me strong! Thank you so much for commenting, I really appreciate it!

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 2/10/2022 8:24:00 AM

A really good pen Komal, lovely rhyme and flow with insightful thought too. Have a great day, regards from Scotland, Gordon

Komal Walimbe
Date: 2/12/2022 5:51:00 AM

Thank you so much for commenting, I really appreciate it. Have a great day to you too!!