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BEST TRIP. By Peter Toland:- written for my bro, James canning. When we go on a journey, there is lots to see. The best thing about it, it is that we're free. Free to explore which is natural to do, explore our emotions or go to the zoo. Go on an old train, a bus anywhere. The good thing about it we don't have a care. Go down to the seafront and sit for a while, contemplate life and all of it's trials. Go to the pub have one drink or two, wherever you go it's all up to you. If you see someone lying in a bag on he floor, remember it probably hurts to the core. Sometimes in this life we can't take anymore, that's why we must go we must go for sure, not on a journey were there's lots to see, but we go on a journey to make us feel free. If you go on this journey you might learn something more, it could possibly be your best trip for sure. The reason I named this best trip is because the name of the horse I backed in the bookies yesterday was called best trip. You dragged me out of bed yesterday evening to go get some fish n chips and sit in the park. Not just any old park. There were some bad people in that park too who have done bad things. Someday him and his dog will meet their match too and things will change for him and his dog. Sometimes in life we've just got to go with the flow and let the water take its natural course, but Sometimes we've gotta get up and do something if through it's natural course the water is drowning us. You've probably guessed by now why I named the poem "Best trip!" Peter Toland.

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Date: 10/5/2015 5:15:00 PM
Peter This is my warm welcome to you, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/5/2015 3:14:00 AM
- A friendly welcome with your first great poem here on Poetry Soup - Hope there will be many ... many more in the future :) - I wish you good luck, Peter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/4/2015 5:51:00 PM
Hi Peter, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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