Best Man

Baby girl so sorry he hurt you so bad. It made me mad cause it made you sad. Tears fall from those beatiful eyes. Baby come running and no more will you cry. I'll apperciate what you do for me. I'll keep you by my side. No longer will you half to hide. Cause i'll be your keeper.Noone will ever harm you again.The love i feel for you is not pretend.All i do is set here and pray.That you see i am a better man.

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Mark Goodson

Date: 3/29/2012 2:39:00 PM

YOUR DOING GREAT WITH THIS. kEEP ON WRITING. aLSO, TAKE TIME TO VIEW THE OTHER POETS POEMS- MAKE COMMENTS, THE MORE YOU COMMENT- THE MORE COMMENTS YOU WILL GET. cHECK OUT THE MEMBERS CONTEST TOO- SEE IF YOU CAN WRITE A POEM TO A CONTEST- IT'S FUN!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/27/2012 5:06:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Streety. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

Karen Croft

Date: 3/26/2012 3:58:00 PM

welcome hope to read more!!!

Mark Goodson

Date: 3/26/2012 9:40:00 AM

click on "My Profile" under Member Area. you will need to brows a pic from something you have already saved in your picture file. Perhaps something from the SSHS site with you in it or just a cool looking pic.

Mark Goodson

Date: 3/26/2012 8:53:00 AM

Your first poem! Congratulations and keek writing. PS- choose pic for your profile. It's always good to see a face with a poem.