Best Freind

bestfreind
outside the world
where our love was curled
bounded in our hearts
where our freindship starts

with you always around me
and noticing everything about me
makes me tell that you are great
without having any debate

the smille on your face,
the worlds that you tell,
the conforts you give,
and the help you donate,
keeps me saying you are my best freind
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November 6, 2013 at 12:27 AM
Samira, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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November 10, 2013 at 7:19 AM
thx that will be pleasure to be ur freind, and hope ur gonna help me with more ways
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November 4, 2013 at 2:56 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, I look forward to enjoying your verse often. Light & Love
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November 10, 2013 at 7:21 AM
thx a big pleasure to know you
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November 4, 2013 at 1:53 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Samira ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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November 10, 2013 at 7:23 AM
thx hope we will be together and you r donna help me with more knowledge
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November 4, 2013 at 11:19 AM
Samira,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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November 10, 2013 at 7:24 AM
thx, wow i like ur name poet destroyer hope ur donna teach me how to be a good poet
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