Best Boy Beyond

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Best Boy Beyond

Precocious boy, yon ere the age of twelve,
Parades vast knowledge, complexity swelled,
Our simplistic share was well understood,
Kept back of minds, preserves naive childhood.

Green imparts years cherished adolescence,
Bottled, we heed, coupled coalescence,
Errant appendages spark normal steps,
Blessed gifted faculties, as classmates frets. 

Removed and placed amongst the elder kids,
Baffled apostles sought entertained bids,
A young mind satisfy matured scholars,
Acquaint the novice school well-spent dollars.

Stands amidst the rare few emboss his name,
An honorary plaque glistens the fame,
Hung in the schools enclosed glass curio,
Caught all cherished moments on video.

Commencement day, he did stand with the rest,
His valedictory speech of years blessed,
Preteen vested had rivaled teenagers,
Acclaimed college exemplary majors.

Evolved above academia's zone,
Ate hamburgers, fries, and an ice cream cone.

2021 March 29
*3rd Place*
A Graduation Blessing
~~BJ Legros Kelley
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Roper Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 2:52 PM
Great write, William , congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 3:52 PM
I am again grateful, Eve, for your faithful acknowledgments my friend, Aloha!
Legros Kelley Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 2:46 PM
Congratulations on your win William! This is an adorable poem about a genius child's high honors, and the sweet innocence of the darling last lines '...Ate hamburgers, fries, and an ice cream cone.' I loved it. I am reading other comments and see You are the child portrayed! Very sweet and very impressive!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 3:49 PM
I extend my courtesies to your shared considerations, Aloha!
Goldsmith Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 12:18 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Have a blessed day writing away...............
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 12:48 PM
Most thoughtful of you, Paula, your generosity emanate from your heart, Aloha!
Kauffman Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 10:19 AM
Wonderful recounting of the journey of growing up William! All the ups and downs so skillfully pictured. This is a poem so many can relate to as their experience. Congratulations on your win! Aloha my friend.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
April 8, 2021 at 11:19 AM
Many thanks, Sam, as this reminded me when I graduated HS at an early age and not with my class I grew up with, driven by school faculty and parents, my true HS experience, and what could have been being reflected in my actual class yearbook and their graduation pics, Aloha!
Hankins Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 9:25 AM
Wonderful. I thought you were going to say "Flipped hamburgers, ate fries, and an ice cream cone." Too many kids these day get their honors and wind up "flipping hamburgers" for less than minimum wages. I loved this poem William. It got my brain cylinders cranking!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
March 30, 2021 at 10:07 AM
Mayhaps Mickey-D's afeared child labor laws, you do raise a point, when helping the homeless at a soup kitchen, met a guy in his 30's who rather sleep on the sidewalk a block from McDonald's than work there saying $ not worth the effort, I left him with his pride and warm cross-bun, thanks for sharing, Milton, Aloha!
Seeker Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 8:31 PM
Superb write, William!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
March 29, 2021 at 8:49 PM
Thank you truly, Aloha!
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