Beso
i was dead
feeling fine
floating e
motionally
sublime
but then if as
a hovercraft
she was above
me as i gasped
lovingly
somebody
some one
no it was
she took
my breath
away but
in turn has
taken me
to places
i've never
seen but
i'll book
another
trip if
she's
with
me
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