Beside the Wall

gentle rain falling red cannas taking a drink makes me thirsty, too written June 28, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/30/2021 11:20:00 PM

I often run in and gulp down water in between watering my gardens.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/1/2021 7:34:00 AM

Always good to stay hydrated.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/29/2021 7:04:00 PM

Your sensory imagery is serene and beautiful, Milt. A wonderful haiku. I love the title too, that sets the quiet stage. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/29/2021 7:06:00 PM

Thank you, Susan, I'm so happy you enjoyed it. Thank you, to for your thoughts on the poem.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 6/29/2021 6:46:00 AM

I had to look up cannas, excited to maybe learn a new bird, a new lily is no less exciting, but sure changes the imagery. ;), Lovely poem! xomo

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/29/2021 8:22:00 AM

Thanks, Mo. I am so glad you learned about cannas. They are leafy, but beautiful blooms.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/29/2021 2:00:00 AM

Stunning imagery, Milton:)

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/29/2021 8:23:00 AM

Thank you so much, Jo.