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Berry Treat

snow dusted berries entice cedar waxwing flock ~ frozen winter treat 11/12/22 Contest: A new hiku footle tanka Poetry Contest. Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/14/2022 1:54:00 AM

Wonderful poem.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/14/2022 4:12:00 AM

Victor, thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2022 3:47:00 PM

SWEET!!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/13/2022 6:57:00 PM

Andrea, thank you!

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/13/2022 1:35:00 PM

Dear Tania, your haiku captures the nature of the winter season perfectly. I adore cedar waxwings, they are beautiful and I love that they appear in your poem. I usually see them in spring when they feast in my mulberry tree. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/13/2022 2:45:00 PM

Susan, thank you!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/12/2022 5:50:00 PM

love the scene, so beautiful !

Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/13/2022 4:01:00 AM

Thank you!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/12/2022 2:44:00 PM

Love the image Tania, seen a flock of starlings on our berry tree, they didn't leave one on it, your haiku reminded me of it. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom

Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/12/2022 3:45:00 PM

Tom, thank you, my weekend is going well. I hope you have a great one as well!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/12/2022 1:03:00 PM

- A beautiful picture in the snow, Tania :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/12/2022 3:45:00 PM

Anne-Lise, thank you!