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Berry Treat

snow dusted berries
entice cedar waxwing flock ~
frozen winter treat

11/12/22
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Victor Buhagiar

November 14, 2022 at 1:54 AM

Wonderful poem.

Tania Kitchin

November 14, 2022 at 4:12 AM

Victor, thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

November 13, 2022 at 3:47 PM

SWEET!!

Tania Kitchin

November 13, 2022 at 6:57 PM

Andrea, thank you!

Susan Ashley

November 13, 2022 at 1:35 PM

Dear Tania, your haiku captures the nature of the winter season perfectly. I adore cedar waxwings, they are beautiful and I love that they appear in your poem. I usually see them in spring when they feast in my mulberry tree. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Tania Kitchin

November 13, 2022 at 2:45 PM

Susan, thank you!

Mystic Rose Rose

November 12, 2022 at 5:50 PM

love the scene, so beautiful !

Tania Kitchin

November 13, 2022 at 4:01 AM

Thank you!

Tom Cunningham

November 12, 2022 at 2:44 PM

Love the image Tania, seen a flock of starlings on our berry tree, they didn't leave one on it, your haiku reminded me of it. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom

Tania Kitchin

November 12, 2022 at 3:45 PM

Tom, thank you, my weekend is going well. I hope you have a great one as well!