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snow dusted berries entice cedar waxwing flock ~ frozen winter treat 11/12/22 Contest: A new hiku footle tanka Poetry Contest. Sponsor: Brian Strand

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Date: 11/14/2022 1:54:00 AM
Wonderful poem.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/14/2022 4:12:00 AM
Victor, thank you!
Date: 11/13/2022 3:47:00 PM
SWEET!!
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/13/2022 6:57:00 PM
Andrea, thank you!
Date: 11/13/2022 1:35:00 PM
Dear Tania, your haiku captures the nature of the winter season perfectly. I adore cedar waxwings, they are beautiful and I love that they appear in your poem. I usually see them in spring when they feast in my mulberry tree. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/13/2022 2:45:00 PM
Susan, thank you!
Date: 11/12/2022 5:50:00 PM
love the scene, so beautiful !
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/13/2022 4:01:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 11/12/2022 2:44:00 PM
Love the image Tania, seen a flock of starlings on our berry tree, they didn't leave one on it, your haiku reminded me of it. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/12/2022 3:45:00 PM
Tom, thank you, my weekend is going well. I hope you have a great one as well!
Date: 11/12/2022 1:03:00 PM
- A beautiful picture in the snow, Tania :) - hugs
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 11/12/2022 3:45:00 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you!