Kim Merryman Poet Haiku

Berries and Snow

blood red berries
                                              cling to stark branches --
                                                 virgin snow glistens


2/23/2013
Entered in Rick Parise's "one of your favz" 1- 8 lines
contest (old poem)

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Kash Poet June 25, 2013 at 11:11 AM Beautiful imagery here Kim.Congrats on your win in the contest.

John Posey June 25, 2013 at 10:48 AM To bring finite clarity out of infinite confusion is an art you have well mastered. Great win.... Jake

Heather Ober June 25, 2013 at 7:13 AM One of the best haiku I have seen on here! To my faves it goes :) Congrats!

Connie Gildersleeve June 25, 2013 at 6:45 AM Kim this is fantastic image in your Haiku. Congratulation on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich June 24, 2013 at 11:27 PM awesome one, Kash!! Congrats, my friend. I didn't win in this one. Sigh!

Bonchance Longfall June 8, 2013 at 11:23 AM Wonderful Haiku! Beautiful contrasts set with blood red berries on stark branches and virgin snow! Perfect visuals.

Michael Dom April 28, 2013 at 1:58 AM very sharp contrast - I like it.

Painted Hunter February 26, 2013 at 1:42 PM Hey, this is really good...

Andrea Dietrich February 24, 2013 at 5:18 PM what a wonderful and stark image this is, wow!