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berries and snow

blood red berries cling to stark branches -- virgin snow glistens 2/23/2013 Entered in Rick Parise's "one of your favz" 1- 8 lines contest (old poem)

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Date: 6/25/2013 11:11:00 AM
Beautiful imagery here Kim.Congrats on your win in the contest.
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Date: 6/25/2013 10:48:00 AM
To bring finite clarity out of infinite confusion is an art you have well mastered. Great win.... Jake
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Date: 6/25/2013 7:13:00 AM
One of the best haiku I have seen on here! To my faves it goes :) Congrats!
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Date: 6/25/2013 6:45:00 AM
Kim this is fantastic image in your Haiku. Congratulation on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/24/2013 11:27:00 PM
awesome one, Kash!! Congrats, my friend. I didn't win in this one. Sigh!
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Date: 6/8/2013 11:23:00 AM
Wonderful Haiku! Beautiful contrasts set with blood red berries on stark branches and virgin snow! Perfect visuals.
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Date: 4/28/2013 1:58:00 AM
very sharp contrast - I like it.
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Date: 2/26/2013 1:42:00 PM
Hey, this is really good...
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Date: 2/24/2013 5:18:00 PM
what a wonderful and stark image this is, wow!
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