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Bereaved

Bereft of life her eyes Barren they stare as folks Bring casseroles, breads, pies Bouquets of fresh flowers Business of world still thrives Bright summer day so warm Baby of hers lies cold Written on 08/16/2016 Contest-Pleaides B by Kim Merryman

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Lu Loo

Date: 9/6/2016 6:36:00 AM

Oh Sara, how sad...:( you portrayed the tone perfectly... congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Paul Callus

Date: 8/21/2016 1:03:00 PM

How sad, Sara! Such a touching poem. Congrats on your merited win. Regards // paul

Jan Allison

Date: 8/20/2016 11:42:00 AM

Dropping back with my congrats Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/20/2016 9:01:00 AM

Sad and moving, Sara. Congratulations on your Third Place podium win! Hugs, Sandra

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 8/20/2016 8:38:00 AM

Congrats on your win!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/20/2016 4:19:00 AM

Beautifully composed Sara, and very moving! Congratulations on your well deserved placement! ; ) 7

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/20/2016 2:59:00 AM

A very sad and moving write, Sara.. congratulations on your great win:)

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/19/2016 7:53:00 PM

Sara, congrats on your 3rd place win! A heartbreaking write. The contrast in the last two lines packs a powerful, emotional punch. Blessings!

James Horn

Date: 8/19/2016 6:32:00 AM

SC, Message to many this is behooving; Quite an experience that was moving; No matter where we may begin, wish baby's life could start over again. My wife is a Certified NICU Nurse. Jim Horn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/17/2016 3:35:00 PM

wow, a heartbreaking one. I believe the best I have seen on B's so far.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/16/2016 11:40:00 AM

Oh Sara such a sad sad poem - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Chansarkar
Date: 8/16/2016 11:48:00 AM

Thanks Jan!