Sara Chansarkar Poet Verse

Bereaved

Bereft of life her eyes
Barren they stare as folks
Bring casseroles, breads, pies
Bouquets of fresh flowers
Business of world still thrives
Bright summer day so warm
Baby of hers lies cold

Written on 08/16/2016
Contest-Pleaides B by Kim Merryman

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Beautiful Scars September 6, 2016 at 6:36 AM Oh Sara, how sad...:( you portrayed the tone perfectly... congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Paul Callus August 21, 2016 at 1:03 PM How sad, Sara! Such a touching poem. Congrats on your merited win. Regards // paul

Jan Allison August 20, 2016 at 11:42 AM Dropping back with my congrats Sara:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight August 20, 2016 at 9:01 AM Sad and moving, Sara. Congratulations on your Third Place podium win! Hugs, Sandra

Sushma A. Singh August 20, 2016 at 8:38 AM Congrats on your win!

Connie Marcum Wong August 20, 2016 at 4:19 AM Beautifully composed Sara, and very moving! Congratulations on your well deserved placement! ; ) 7

Joanna Daniel August 20, 2016 at 2:59 AM A very sad and moving write, Sara.. congratulations on your great win:)

Kim Merryman August 19, 2016 at 7:53 PM Sara, congrats on your 3rd place win! A heartbreaking write. The contrast in the last two lines packs a powerful, emotional punch. Blessings!

James Horn August 19, 2016 at 6:32 AM SC, Message to many this is behooving; Quite an experience that was moving; No matter where we may begin, wish baby's life could start over again. My wife is a Certified NICU Nurse. Jim Horn

Andrea Dietrich August 17, 2016 at 3:35 PM wow, a heartbreaking one. I believe the best I have seen on B's so far.

Jan Allison August 16, 2016 at 11:40 AM Oh Sara such a sad sad poem - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Sara Chansarkar August 16, 2016 at 11:48 AM Thanks Jan!