Benevolent Freefall Haiku

i now become one
with benevolent freefall
never coming down
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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June 27, 2015 at 11:11 PM
This is a poetry form I always admire reading, but have not attempted to write one comfortably. From what I know, the restriction of just so few words that leave the imagination lots of room to interpret. Like this one, I am thinking a person going into freefall is someone lost with no sense of how to find his way. Am I far out?
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