Benevolence

Lost and astonished I crave this day
That places to proof all that hardship I feel
There is no time for me to say
I just cry alone searching my will

As I walk through the valley  of decay
I find no strength in the life for the  wound to  heal
I just walk alone, sad and pray
That my destiny will soon fulfill

Lost and astonished I crave this day
Where in the past there were so many appeals
I cant give up, I will stand and not let it stay
to enhance the moment as it truly reveals

I let out a scream and  my mind flies away
As the despair in my body seals
The words of peace that I need today

Lost and astonished I crave this day
For positive thoughts to be my ideal 
In solutions and upcoming ways
to find hope, when hope conceals

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Date: 12/13/2013 4:38:00 AM
Hi Thoubert,congratulations on your win xx
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Date: 12/13/2013 1:17:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Thoubert
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Date: 12/12/2013 12:22:00 PM
All the poetry submitted was heartfelt. From love throughout life to love in the depths of death with reflections of nature. You are all deserving First Place Winners and I thank you for entering your favorites in my contest.
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Date: 1/4/2012 8:05:00 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Thoubert. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/11/2012 6:45:00 PM
thank you Carol!! I was away for a while..but now I am back!!! I just found out yesterday that I did get futured!!
Date: 12/12/2011 7:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Thoubert. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/13/2011 6:15:00 PM
Brilliant piece of poetry with nice refrains, Thoubert
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