Benevolence

Lost and astonished I crave this day
That places to proof all that hardship I feel
There is no time for me to say
I just cry alone searching my will

As I walk through the valley  of decay
I find no strength in the life for the  wound to  heal
I just walk alone, sad and pray
That my destiny will soon fulfill

Lost and astonished I crave this day
Where in the past there were so many appeals
I cant give up, I will stand and not let it stay
to enhance the moment as it truly reveals

I let out a scream and  my mind flies away
As the despair in my body seals
The words of peace that I need today

Lost and astonished I crave this day
For positive thoughts to be my ideal 
In solutions and upcoming ways
to find hope, when hope conceals
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 4:38 AM
Hi Thoubert,congratulations on your win xx
Mehta Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 1:17 AM
Congrats on the win, Thoubert
Konos Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 12:22 PM
All the poetry submitted was heartfelt. From love throughout life to love in the depths of death with reflections of nature. You are all deserving First Place Winners and I thank you for entering your favorites in my contest.
Brown Avatar
January 4, 2012 at 8:05 AM
Congratulations on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest. Wishing you the best in the finals Thoubert. Love, Carol
Larus Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 6:45 PM
thank you Carol!! I was away for a while..but now I am back!!! I just found out yesterday that I did get futured!!
Brown Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 7:24 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Thoubert. A well deserved feature. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
June 13, 2011 at 6:15 PM
Brilliant piece of poetry with nice refrains, Thoubert
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