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Date written: 04/01/2025

winter with it's fangs retracted s l i t h e r s away. see you next year! spring is here gravid with infinite possibilities mother earth aging in reverse; clothed in her sunday best. I shall make the most of this glorious day! l i l a c s breath honey into my nostrils. i hear early birds tweeting. i see flowers blooming. in the infancy of spring, pollinating bees buzz with excitement gleeful blades of grass sway in the breeze. I shall make the most of this glorious day! with blessings of rain, bare trees quench their thirst. starlings against the lapis lazuli sky dazzle me so. a shy sun peeks out, brightly beaming down my head as I walk, frequently whistling beneath waltzing clouds. I shall make the most of of this glorious day!

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Date: 4/4/2025 11:32:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful, mesmerized. Loved: with blessings of rain, bare trees quench their thirst. starlings against the lapis lazuli sky dazzle me so. Congrats, Edward!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/4/2025 1:04:00 PM
Thank you very much for the feedback and visit, Kim:-)
Date: 4/2/2025 12:40:00 PM
Edward. Beautiful and uplifting. The world is breathtaking once again in Spring. Love what you have created here.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/2/2025 12:49:00 PM
Thank you very much for the wonderful feedback and visit, Suzanne:-)

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