Beneath the Skin

Sometimes veins play hide and seek
When blood draws are required
And nurses who can nail one down
Deserve to be admired.

My daughter’s veins are tiny
Though the rest of her is not.
Unfortunately, doctors need
Her bloodwork quite a lot.

Today two experts, though quite nice,
Just couldn’t find a vein.
They poked and prodded, trying hard
To not cause any pain.

At last my daughter’d had enough;
Attempts came to a halt,
With lots of reassurances
That she was not at fault.

Our bodies on the outside
Don’t allow the slightest glance
Of what lurks beneath the skin
Which we discover just by chance.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 3:33 PM
an interesting one gleaned from your daughter's situation with her veins. they have problems finding mine too, so I can relate to that story.
Allison Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 5:31 AM
Oh your poor daughter Ilene -that must be so frustrating for her. I have no problem with them finding my veins ... I just hate having blood taken from the vampire nurse lol. thankfully I think I am finally over my needle phobia - 4 blood tests and I had no issues - I know how to combat it now and as long as they listen to me I am fine:-) hugs Jan xx
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