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Beneath the Sea

The oceans creatures live beneath
Where Mermaids and Mermen live in secret
Mysterious caves, coral reefs
Guarded by creatures deep beneath 

The sound of a trumpet
will echo through walls 
sound through caves bounce off reefs
Alert their kingdom from other beliefs

Jewels and treasures bottomless,  
so empty 
Happiness, peace is what floods throughout
Hidden secrets, knowledge and wisdom 
all make up this timeless kingdom

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/7/2018 5:51:00 PM
Your poetry is deep my friend way below the sea you give me sight to see way below the sea! GREAT poetry!! Write some more I need something to read your poetry inspires me!
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Victoria Addino
Date: 12/10/2018 8:42:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 11/29/2018 11:26:00 PM
The first stanza and the last stanza both enthralled me. I was going to highlight what I liked best but I liked the entire WHOLE thing including the middle stanza. You have give the sea a magical, mystical feeling in this write, Victoria.
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Victoria Addino
Date: 12/10/2018 8:43:00 PM
Thank You

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