Beneath the Sea

The oceans creatures live beneath
Where Mermaids and Mermen live in secret
Mysterious caves, coral reefs
Guarded by creatures deep beneath 

The sound of a trumpet
will echo through walls 
sound through caves bounce off reefs
Alert their kingdom from other beliefs

Jewels and treasures bottomless,  
so empty 
Happiness, peace is what floods throughout
Hidden secrets, knowledge and wisdom 
all make up this timeless kingdom
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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December 7, 2018 at 5:51 PM
Your poetry is deep my friend way below the sea you give me sight to see way below the sea! GREAT poetry!! Write some more I need something to read your poetry inspires me!
Addino Avatar
December 10, 2018 at 8:42 PM
Thanks
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November 29, 2018 at 11:26 PM
The first stanza and the last stanza both enthralled me. I was going to highlight what I liked best but I liked the entire WHOLE thing including the middle stanza. You have give the sea a magical, mystical feeling in this write, Victoria.
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December 10, 2018 at 8:43 PM
Thank You
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