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Beneath The Ocean Floor

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Disheveled as the fingers of morning this sage in her sedentary stoic seat needs no purge to enter gloaming Ripped at the seams by eventide with hair of finest wheat she lingers fearless as the tide Dormant dreams at sundown's door chalk faced white as sheet she drowns, in the ocean bellied floor taken by the shackles of her wrists on leaden feet she walks towards the ether, in Gist

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Date: 7/11/2021 11:40:00 PM
Oh that's so beautiful
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Date: 7/5/2021 10:23:00 PM
Such a melancholy write, why did this wise woman commit herself to the ocean? Was it because of the chaos she discerned? ...
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Date: 7/5/2021 10:54:00 AM
Profound meaning that leads to a profound destiny, really unfathomable. Best wishes and hugs
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Date: 7/5/2021 10:39:00 AM
A sad ending. Drowning is not pleasant. HUgs.
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