Beneath the Mountain Streams

Glistening rays ripping the delicate stream from where the breezes are born
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 1, 2011 at 9:36 AM
Nice and original...the water is giving rise to the air....very imaginative write! Gwendolen
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June 1, 2011 at 8:40 AM
Smile ~ Once more I come upon a paradoxes presentations abstract moment ~ Hopefully, the glistening remains a glittering, flowful stream of pleasantries waters ~ Unto the Sea of Eternities Joyful Tides ~ Good Verse ~ Love, John!:) ~
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