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Beneath the Mountain Streams

Glistening rays ripping the delicate stream from where the breezes are born

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/1/2011 9:36:00 AM
Nice and original...the water is giving rise to the air....very imaginative write! Gwendolen
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Date: 6/1/2011 8:40:00 AM
Smile ~ Once more I come upon a paradoxes presentations abstract moment ~ Hopefully, the glistening remains a glittering, flowful stream of pleasantries waters ~ Unto the Sea of Eternities Joyful Tides ~ Good Verse ~ Love, John!:) ~
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