Beneath the Mask

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(Cinquain Chain) Feelings May come and go Some pretend them so well Hiding theirs under the thick mask Most of the time They wear. Conflicts Are born,you hurt People when you pretend Love and feelings that you don't feel Donning a mask All time. True self Is never shown Some choose not to do so Believing's not important- Then Love,kindness just Gets lost. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 October,31,2014

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Shane Cooper

Date: 1/12/2015 3:11:00 AM

it is a wonderful poem, i can really relate to it. gone into my favs. love Shane xxx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 9:32:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Shane,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/2/2014 7:41:00 AM

to turn away love is the opposite of beauty truly beautifully painted piece dorian dear pal bless you in light

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/22/2015 9:33:00 PM

Thank you so kindly,Liam,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xoxox D