Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Cinquain

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Beneath the Mask

(Cinquain Chain) 


Feelings 
May come and go 
Some pretend them so well 
Hiding theirs under the thick mask 
Most of the time 
They wear. 

Conflicts 
Are born,you hurt 
People when you pretend 
Love and feelings that you don't feel 
Donning a mask 
All time. 

True self 
Is never shown 
Some choose not to do so 
Believing's not important- Then 
Love,kindness just 
Gets lost. 



Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2014


October,31,2014

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Shane Cooper January 12, 2015 at 3:11 AM it is a wonderful poem, i can really relate to it. gone into my favs. love Shane xxx Dorian Petersen Potter February 22, 2015 at 9:32 PM Thank you so kindly,Shane,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :) D.

Liam Mcdaid November 2, 2014 at 7:41 AM to turn away love is the opposite of beauty truly beautifully painted piece dorian dear pal bless you in light Dorian Petersen Potter February 22, 2015 at 9:33 PM Thank you so kindly,Liam,for stopping by and commenting on my work. Much appreciated my dearest friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xoxox D