Bemused

By image moments of kaleidoscopic green- a pure abstract scene Inspired by Raul's latest photo contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2010 1:38:00 PM

Congratulations, Brian. Very nice!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/16/2010 5:21:00 AM

Congrats Brian on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a wonderful view of the photo and a wonderful win for u to so enjoy ..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Mitch White

Date: 4/16/2010 4:15:00 AM

Great capture of the photo, kaleidoscopic describes it well- Congrats Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/16/2010 1:56:00 AM

Brian, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/10/2010 7:19:00 AM

Great write that should be in the winner's circle...Good luck...Spring is that kaleidoscope of green...Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/10/2010 6:26:00 AM

Good luck with this brilliant Haiku in Raul's contest... my entry is "Illumination" and its amazing to read all the different ideas in poetry of all who gaze at that photo he presented.. good luck Brian... luv.. Linda-Marie..

James Marshall Goff

Date: 4/10/2010 5:51:00 AM

original poem, perfect capture of Raul's photo! jimbo

Charles Henderson

Date: 4/10/2010 1:20:00 AM

I like it. Good luck in the contest. BTW/ I changed my poem down to 19 lines just for your contest. Check and make sure it works for you. Charles

Tim Ryerson

Date: 4/10/2010 12:41:00 AM

You are loaded with inspiration this fine morning, Brian...great entry for the contest! - Tim