David Mohn Poet Verse

Bemasked

Bemasked

Behind a happy mask
Beneath your guise of joy
Belie sweet wounded eyes
Betrothed to dreams unlived
Belayed for these few hours
Because you smile tonight 


27 Apr 2014 - Dave Mohn
Let's Pleiades Contest

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Poet Destroyer A May 6, 2014 at 11:40 AM Hi David, wow... to let it all go... A smile, can bemask it all... enjoyed your winning poem... Linda David Mohn May 6, 2014 at 1:17 PM Thanks Linda...always a pleasure when you stop by :)

Andrea Dietrich May 3, 2014 at 12:14 AM wow this is so lovely. Glad to see it first on the list. congratulations David Mohn May 3, 2014 at 8:04 AM Thanks so much Andrea :)

Debbie Guzzi May 1, 2014 at 8:38 PM truly lovely. Congrad's Light & Love David Mohn May 1, 2014 at 10:01 PM Thanks Debbie...appreciate you stopping by and leaving the nice comment

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 1, 2014 at 6:27 AM it's trully great write. :D COngratz on the great win.. :D, olive eloisa :) David Mohn May 1, 2014 at 12:37 PM Thank you so much Olive for the kind comments :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma May 1, 2014 at 5:50 AM Wonderful write on the theme, congrats on great win David ! David Mohn May 1, 2014 at 12:35 PM Thank you very much Dr. Upma...much appreciated

Paul Callus May 1, 2014 at 5:17 AM Congrats David; this is a really merited win! // paul David Mohn May 1, 2014 at 12:33 PM Thanks Paul...you always have a kind word :)

Nette Onclaud May 1, 2014 at 4:45 AM love the progress of your vivid thoughts where happy is really sad.. best cheers on your win in my contest.. huggs David Mohn May 1, 2014 at 12:30 PM Thanks Nette for your thoughtful comments and the placement in your contest...really means a lot