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Below Zero

the cold
          dulls
subtle senses,
sterilises
            well-being:
unsettles
        the positive
induces
           futility
vanquishes
             desire-
and in silence
                     kills

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Date: 12/12/2017 8:21:00 AM
Killer pen :) a fave
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Brian Strand
Date: 12/12/2017 8:24:00 AM
Thanks Maureen
Date: 12/12/2017 7:07:00 AM
the sound of silence is always a "silent" killer". great poem dear Brian... luloo
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Brian Strand
Date: 12/12/2017 7:26:00 AM
Thank you Laura(and also for your support to my contests)

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