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Hello, how are you I am fine, and you Towering over high I see a bride What do you think Of those who do not When honour is linked, And cannot be bought How do we free it If it is so That so many need it Is but a woe But thou have it near From afar I have heard As Thou art dear Silent of word And keep thy silence Oh honoured geust Lest it blow, And many a bow Strike the matches Of a hungered soul Who could not but wait At thy present fate A cold mistless night When the sun is out of sight To climb the mountain at this hour Pick a flower for they honour Would thy accept I wonder? To let go of the honours, dreams and dye To cast asunder The decorative bye and sigh To let go of the honours That such a tale intales And live free of the world That hath honoured thy hand...

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Date: 7/2/2016 11:33:00 PM
Yousef, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Yousef Al-Watheqi
Date: 7/3/2016 6:40:00 AM
Thank you , glad to be here :)
Date: 7/2/2016 9:04:00 PM
Yousef, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I know you are an Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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Yousef Al-Watheqi
Date: 7/3/2016 6:41:00 AM
Will do :)
Date: 7/2/2016 9:03:00 PM
Great way to keep the silence and honor a guest....I love that line... Rating this poem with a 7. Skat
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Yousef Al-Watheqi
Date: 7/3/2016 6:40:00 AM
Glad you liked it :)

Book: Shattered Sighs