Beloved

What better sight could warm my heart than…
Sunlight glinting off the water
Where you swim in harmony
With Neptune’s own rhythm
Dancing with the waves
Sweep, crest, surge, rest…
Natural
As the
Sea
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Coet Avatar
November 17, 2008 at 9:02 AM
I enjoyed this poem. I would like for our editorial board to have the opportunity to consider it for Blue Fog Journal’s “Contemporary Romantic Love Poems” anthology. If you are interested please review the submission guidelines at the following link: http://bluefogjournal.com/call-for-submission/. Sincerely, ED COET Editor, Blue Fog Journal
Reynolds Avatar
November 8, 2008 at 4:05 AM
Excellent, nonet, I could see her there perfectly...love this one, love Kristin
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