Belonging

do you think i belong here?
so close to you, so near
oh Penelope did you hear?
she wants me right there..

but I am lost in deep mess 
in a pit, a fissure, an Abyss
oh canopy of tall trees?
i just want to be in bliss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Junaid Avatar
June 7, 2024 at 4:53 AM
such good imagery and rhyme! an enjoyable piece indeed.
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