Gabby Sabre Poet Verse

Bella's Pier

Seagulls roost on a dock
With calming tweets of song
But I wobble along
As night quivers 

Fleeting birds reel below
While tide swishes away
Lonely like wings of day
Mocked by despair

This pier screams for Bella
Her hair feathered in gold
Waved ruffles to behold
I drown---she’s gone.


Gabby Sabre 
On The Pier Contest of nette onclaud
8 July 2014

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Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2014 at 6:06 PM I just really love this one and its mood you created. Congrats on your win.

Jerry T Curtis July 15, 2014 at 5:33 AM Congrats on your win, Gabby

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 14, 2014 at 11:38 PM Perfect for contest Gabby,, all stanzas beautiful but the last one just awesome,, n merited first place win! Huge congrats!

Greg Hoffman July 14, 2014 at 10:49 PM Congrats Tabby on your top win with this fine poem.Well done Greg Hoffman July 14, 2014 at 10:54 PM Sorry about the auto correct mistake Gabby,one must be smarter than their device and I'm not.Again Gabby well done.

Casarah Nance July 14, 2014 at 6:19 PM Tragic and beautiful, Perfectly a winner, well done! !

Arlene Smith July 14, 2014 at 2:42 PM Congrats on top win, dear Gabby! Hugs.. Arlene

Faye Gibson July 14, 2014 at 2:27 PM This is so sadly beautiful, Gabby. Congratulations on the top placement.

Pandita Sietesantos July 14, 2014 at 2:14 PM Hi Gabby, congratulations on a fabulous well-deserved win! This is such beautiful, melancholy write! Bravo and warmest regards.

Nette Onclaud July 14, 2014 at 1:12 PM i was stunned by the melancholic mood of this piece, gabby.. it deserves a top place in my contest... sweet congrats and hugs!

Jan Allison July 14, 2014 at 11:52 AM I can see why Nette loved this - a worthy first place winner! Hugs jan xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 14, 2014 at 11:30 AM tragic one..!! congratulations!!! :) awesome!

Jeremy Street July 8, 2014 at 1:47 PM Break On Through To The Other Side ~ Glittering Trails Shimmering Silver Tides Hey There, Sweet Baby Girl....KLove *