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Bella's Pier

Seagulls roost on a dock With calming tweets of song But I wobble along As night quivers Fleeting birds reel below While tide swishes away Lonely like wings of day Mocked by despair This pier screams for Bella Her hair feathered in gold Waved ruffles to behold I drown---she’s gone. Gabby Sabre On The Pier Contest of nette onclaud 8 July 2014

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Date: 7/16/2014 6:06:00 PM
I just really love this one and its mood you created. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/15/2014 5:33:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Gabby
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Date: 7/14/2014 11:38:00 PM
Perfect for contest Gabby,, all stanzas beautiful but the last one just awesome,, n merited first place win! Huge congrats!
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Date: 7/14/2014 10:49:00 PM
Congrats Tabby on your top win with this fine poem.Well done
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Date: 7/14/2014 10:54:00 PM
Sorry about the auto correct mistake Gabby,one must be smarter than their device and I'm not.Again Gabby well done.
Date: 7/14/2014 6:19:00 PM
Tragic and beautiful, Perfectly a winner, well done! !
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Date: 7/14/2014 2:42:00 PM
Congrats on top win, dear Gabby! Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/14/2014 2:27:00 PM
This is so sadly beautiful, Gabby. Congratulations on the top placement.
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Date: 7/14/2014 2:14:00 PM
Hi Gabby, congratulations on a fabulous well-deserved win! This is such beautiful, melancholy write! Bravo and warmest regards.
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Date: 7/14/2014 1:12:00 PM
i was stunned by the melancholic mood of this piece, gabby.. it deserves a top place in my contest... sweet congrats and hugs!
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Date: 7/14/2014 11:52:00 AM
I can see why Nette loved this - a worthy first place winner! Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 7/14/2014 11:30:00 AM
tragic one..!! congratulations!!! :) awesome!
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Date: 7/8/2014 1:47:00 PM
Break On Through To The Other Side ~ Glittering Trails Shimmering Silver Tides Hey There, Sweet Baby Girl....KLove *
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