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Believe It Or Not

I've never been so appalled By such a sudden shock! When ev'ry plan is strictly stalled- Like Luck lies in a Lock. A powdered nose makes way for prose- Try to relax; it's not that bad. But it's not fair, and God, he knows- Just think of all the Love you've had...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Robin Davis
Date: 11/8/2013 7:17:00 PM
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Chan Da Man This write is interesting and intriguing. I can feel what's in your heart and soul. Nice job Thanks for the kind comments on my Stars of Hope poem. Hugs and Love Sweet Pea
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Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 11/9/2013 5:45:00 AM
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Glad you enjoyed. hon bun! Thanks for the review <3
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/6/2013 9:38:00 AM
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I sometimes think I have gotten more than I have deserved. Great poem!
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Date: 11/6/2013 12:49:00 PM
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Much appreciated, my friend :)
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Mark Peterson
Date: 11/5/2013 6:29:00 PM
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Is it true? Just thinking makes it so. Too bad I stopped and gave it up, not so very long ago.
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Date: 11/5/2013 6:30:00 PM
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This poem was inspired by tonight's events; read my blog for a further explanation. Thank you for dropping by, Mark :)

Book: Shattered Sighs