Just That Archaic Poet Poet Rhyme

Believe It Or Not

I've never been so appalled
By such a sudden shock!
When ev'ry plan is strictly stalled-
Like Luck lies in a Lock.
A powdered nose makes way for prose-
Try to relax; it's not that bad.
But it's not fair, and God, he knows-
Just think of all the Love you've had...

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Robin Davis November 8, 2013 at 7:17 PM Chan Da Man This write is interesting and intriguing. I can feel what's in your heart and soul. Nice job Thanks for the kind comments on my Stars of Hope poem. Hugs and Love Sweet Pea Just That Archaic Poet November 9, 2013 at 5:45 AM Glad you enjoyed. hon bun! Thanks for the review <3

Richard Lamoureux November 6, 2013 at 9:38 AM I sometimes think I have gotten more than I have deserved. Great poem! Just That Archaic Poet November 6, 2013 at 12:49 PM Much appreciated, my friend :)

Mark Peterson November 5, 2013 at 6:29 PM Is it true? Just thinking makes it so. Too bad I stopped and gave it up, not so very long ago. Just That Archaic Poet November 5, 2013 at 6:30 PM This poem was inspired by tonight's events; read my blog for a further explanation. Thank you for dropping by, Mark :)