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Believe In Something That Will Die

Believe in something that will die, Do you know what that is like? Don't tell me you do, I know you lie... Earn your wings, only then you fly, Only if you had the time, Believe in something that will die... Hope the light still reaches your eyes, Reflects in the shadow's misleading dive, Believe in something that will die... Believe in something that will die, Only now, only if I might, Restless again, I hope you don't cry... I ask you, and you deny, Still I find the truth inside, as I Believe in something that will die... My devotion will never fade, A blink and a suspicion of a slight emotion, but I Just think my memories trick me in their way, Still I ask: "Do you believe in something that will die?"

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Date: 6/15/2010 4:51:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jorge. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2010 2:16:00 AM
This Villanelle has great flow to it. Thanks for the upload. Gavin.
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Date: 6/13/2010 10:05:00 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family... so enjoyed your creative write tonight ..with luf from the "Sweetheart" ...
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Date: 6/13/2010 8:05:00 AM
This is an excellent villanelle. It flows very well. The essence of the message is wonderful. Welcome to Poetry Soul and keep writing. Blessings, Joseph
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Date: 6/13/2010 7:13:00 AM
Thanks, Jorge, for supporting my contest
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Date: 6/13/2010 5:16:00 AM
YES....absolutely truth of life well done
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